mysterious new ally of Mechanov part 1

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Captain
Jun 26, 2010
568
This ally will be something epic, an ally that's a Steampunk Genius. He's about 5 years older then any of the young pirates. This one is also Kane's new armada's lead genius. This ally’s name is Baron Von Technus but the armada calls him by Mr. Technus but others back in Mechanov call him by his notorious nickname “Tech”. After Bishop's defeat by the young pirates, Kane's forces were at a critical low. That is when Kane went to the sister world of Mechanov for the "Eternal Gear". He then saw something that caught his spark. Knowing Mechanov is a world of humans, creatures, and clockwork steampunks of all kinds. What fascinated Kane so much is that he knew he must add this one to his forces. Tech was a guy who had a bad reputation in Mechanov. He was a rookie to the most notorious steampunk gang in Mechanov the, “Gear Grinders” back when he was young, that was until he took out the gang leader, the baddest guy in the Steam Stream Skyway, known as Scar Gear and sent him running out of the Steam Stream Skyway. He became the leader of Gear Grinders for a while, a few years back, until he met Kane. That was when his life changed forever. Kane made him an offer he couldn’t refuse. A mountain of riches and a world he could call home, but in return he must uphold four requests. 1# is to swear his allegiance to the armada, 2# is to invent new powerful armada clockworks & weapons for Kane to control, 3# (if any who dares)any pirate get in Kane’s path will be dealt with in a “grim” way, 4# is to seize the “Eternal Gear” for Kane to wield as he pleases. Knowing it was suicide to try to attempt that, but it would be worth it for him to finally feel alive and to escape a very painful past. So accepting the offer, his life was changed, until the past catches up to the present. So stay in touch for more on this new ally.

- Deadeye Jack Morgan

Dread Pirate
Jun 17, 2013
2674
jack morgan933 on Dec 17, 2013 wrote:
This ally will be something epic, an ally that's a Steampunk Genius. He's about 5 years older then any of the young pirates. This one is also Kane's new armada's lead genius. This ally’s name is Baron Von Technus but the armada calls him by Mr. Technus but others back in Mechanov call him by his notorious nickname “Tech”. After Bishop's defeat by the young pirates, Kane's forces were at a critical low. That is when Kane went to the sister world of Mechanov for the "Eternal Gear". He then saw something that caught his spark. Knowing Mechanov is a world of humans, creatures, and clockwork steampunks of all kinds. What fascinated Kane so much is that he knew he must add this one to his forces. Tech was a guy who had a bad reputation in Mechanov. He was a rookie to the most notorious steampunk gang in Mechanov the, “Gear Grinders” back when he was young, that was until he took out the gang leader, the baddest guy in the Steam Stream Skyway, known as Scar Gear and sent him running out of the Steam Stream Skyway. He became the leader of Gear Grinders for a while, a few years back, until he met Kane. That was when his life changed forever. Kane made him an offer he couldn’t refuse. A mountain of riches and a world he could call home, but in return he must uphold four requests. 1# is to swear his allegiance to the armada, 2# is to invent new powerful armada clockworks & weapons for Kane to control, 3# (if any who dares)any pirate get in Kane’s path will be dealt with in a “grim” way, 4# is to seize the “Eternal Gear” for Kane to wield as he pleases. Knowing it was suicide to try to attempt that, but it would be worth it for him to finally feel alive and to escape a very painful past. So accepting the offer, his life was changed, until the past catches up to the present. So stay in touch for more on this new ally.

- Deadeye Jack Morgan
Hello Jack!

Very creative and imaginative. You put lots of thought Into developing this character. Keep the story going and the creative 'juices' flowing.

And welcome to the message boards by the way. Good to have you aboard.

Gunner's Mate
Oct 11, 2012
283
Well made Jack Morgan.

this is an interesting character that fits well with the world you created. I'm impressed with what your mind thinks up. the world concept is truly fascinating. Keep up the good work.

yours truly,

Impish Omar Underwood

Captain
Jun 26, 2010
568
Thank ye mates for ye support tune in soon