LOTP (Lord of the Pirates)

Feb 27, 2009
Intro of LOTP
Based off of LOTR but only this time, the Spiral/Pirate version
Feedback is always welcome

Lord of the Pirates
One by one
the free lands of the Spiral fell to the power of the Armada.
But there were some who resisted.
A Last Alliance of Pirates and Marleybonians marched against the armies of Valencia.
And on the edge of the the machine, they fought for the freedom of the Spiral.
Victory was near.
But the power of Valencia ... could not be undone.
It was in this moment ... when all hope had faded ... Jacob Freeman, son of Francis Drake, took up his fathers gun.
Kane, the enemy of the free peoples of the Spiral, was defeated.
Kane's ring passed to Jacob Freeman ... who had one chance to destroy evil forever.
Avery: Jacob Freeman, hurry! Follow me.
Avery: I led Jacob Freeman into the heart of the machine.
Where the ring was forged, the one place it could be destroyed.
Avery: Cast it into the fire!
Avery: Destroy it! -No!
Avery: Jacob Freeman!
It should have ended that day, but evil was allowed to endure.
But the hearts of the Pirates ... are easily corrupted.
And the Ring of Power has a will of it's own.
It betrayed Jacob Freeman ... to his death.
And some things that should not been forgotten ... were lost.

Now comment below and tell me if I should continue!
Main Characters
Isildur = Jacob Freeman
Frodo = Joshua Wildhammer
(Sam = Patrick (from Spongebob JK) Sam = Charlie the Starfish
Gandalf = Luke (Some guy I found in a tavern of Skull Island)
Sauron = Quentin Atherton
Some terms to know
Modor = Valencia
Modor's Army = Valencian's Army
Mount Doom = The Machine (AKA The Grand Design)
As we go along with the story; I'll edit this post to put in more of the terms.
Even though I gave you the decision of deciding, I feel like I'll keep going.

Sep 29, 2010
Well as a regular person yeah it looks good. But as a fan of the LOTR series, no just don't.