El Dorado, 1st arc end idea

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Captain
Dec 11, 2010
740
You and your companions have finally reached El dorado. The place is indeed as the legend says, gold everywhere. But before you and your companions grabs any gold, the ground rumbles. Old scratch then mentions that El Dorado appears to be falling a part. Ratbeard notices that there are Clockworks around and that a giant hole with golden stairs are in the middle of the Island. Old scratch insists we go down the stairs to see what is causing the shakes. After going down you come face to face with Queen Ama Darose the Queen of the Armada. She talks about your parents and how that they killed Kane with their final movement. Then your companions start falling one by one and Old scratch says, "Captain the curse it's making us weaker". After every storyline companion falls you begin your fight against the Queen, her stats are twice your stats and your meant to lose the battle. Afterwords your parent's ghosts whisper "Stand up son/daughter, we shall lend you our power". Afterword's your facing the Queen of the Armada with your stats tripled and with a new power "Call allies" and no other powers. Call allies will call 3 random Main Storyline companions to help you fight, all with only 1 health left. After defeating Queen Ama Darose she will self destruct after saying, "YOU, you haven't won yet, Kane will avenge me in Darkmoor". Then a statue will appear which your companions will then say, "Claim the statue and the curse of El Dorado will stop hurting us."
After picking up the statue all your companions get back on their feet and thank you for taking them along this adventure. However Old scratch reminds you of what Ama Darose said and that evil may arrive once more. Ratbeard then says "Well the spiral does have many other treasures, but for now let's party till the cheese comes home". Thus ending the storyline once you get to the tavern (after a much needed congrats from Boochbeard, Gandry, and Avery) but your character hears a mysterious message in the form of Queen Ama Darose's voice "Kane will arrive soon" to which nobody else hears.

The reward for beating the first arc is a Badge called, Golden *enter class name* plus a statue for your house that resembles the one you found in El Dorado, plus 100,0000 gold for finding such a fantastic treasure.

And thus ends the 1st arc (But what did Queen Ama Darose mean? What is around the corner? only time can tell)

Lieutenant
Feb 15, 2014
140
our parents didn't kill kane and we have to go to darkmoor to get to el dorado
i don't like it

Petty Officer
Jul 25, 2013
88
Ensign
Dec 02, 2012
22
that sounds like a rally cool story but I think that at least one of the main storyline companions like old scratch should be able to help you fight

Ensign
Aug 23, 2009
6
Sir That Guy on Feb 26, 2014 wrote:
hmm, its not bad, i like it
it's a retcon...

we KNOW kane to be alive...
we KNOW him to be an important figure in the current story

it doesn't help that s/he even mentions that your parents kill kane before you meet the "queen"

more importantly than any of that however...they've painted kane as this super complex machine that the armada hasn't even come close to reproducing (stronger than rooke...smarter than bishop...etc) for whatever reason

this means if the Queen (one of rookes court..whom are all weaker than him) take that much aid...

then the parents of the pirate had to have been stupidly strong like..not mortal strong

Captain
Dec 11, 2010
740
yetarel on Mar 6, 2014 wrote:
it's a retcon...

we KNOW kane to be alive...
we KNOW him to be an important figure in the current story

it doesn't help that s/he even mentions that your parents kill kane before you meet the "queen"

more importantly than any of that however...they've painted kane as this super complex machine that the armada hasn't even come close to reproducing (stronger than rooke...smarter than bishop...etc) for whatever reason

this means if the Queen (one of rookes court..whom are all weaker than him) take that much aid...

then the parents of the pirate had to have been stupidly strong like..not mortal strong
My reasoning behind your parents killing Kane is that it was actually an illusion. Kane as brilliant as he is, was to use rage in order to turn Ama Darose into an indefeatable machine